Post by Salmonsplash on Feb 13, 2013 20:27:42 GMT
(Sorry this is pathetically short. Revising for controlled assessment 
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Salmonsplash had been walking quite peacefully along the border. It was dusk, the time of her Clan, and she'd been happy and quite serene and in her usual state of daydreaming and looking at pretty sunsets and - what?
That red glow across the horizon was not a sunset.
Salmonsplash tilted her head, looking at it. It was sort of pretty. She bet she could achieve that effect with a bit of mud. Possibly some berry juice. DuskClan didn't waste berries, as a rule, but some red mud, yes, and - wait, no, concentrate.
Red glow.
As she watched it, head on one side, it seemed to... spread.
And then she got it. Then it hit her all at once and she yowled in panic, turning around and dashing for the current location of DuskClan camp.
Fire!
)Salmonsplash had been walking quite peacefully along the border. It was dusk, the time of her Clan, and she'd been happy and quite serene and in her usual state of daydreaming and looking at pretty sunsets and - what?
That red glow across the horizon was not a sunset.
Salmonsplash tilted her head, looking at it. It was sort of pretty. She bet she could achieve that effect with a bit of mud. Possibly some berry juice. DuskClan didn't waste berries, as a rule, but some red mud, yes, and - wait, no, concentrate.
Red glow.
As she watched it, head on one side, it seemed to... spread.
And then she got it. Then it hit her all at once and she yowled in panic, turning around and dashing for the current location of DuskClan camp.
Fire!