Mintkit (euurgh....)

[Mintkit]

Yeah, that's the best name I can come up with. =.=

Name: Mintkit
Nickname/Alias: Uh, none?
Gender: Female...
Age: Five moons.
Group: DuskClan
Rank: A. KIT.
Appearance: Shabby light grey fur that sticks out at odd angles like she never washes or whatever cats do. Green eyes that... seem to glint when she gets excited or curious or whatever. She's about as small as you can get and you can walk right past her without noticing her... if that's even possible. She talks really quietly so you have to lean in to hear and is always in a slouch.
Physical Strengths: She can hide herself rather well considering her size. More flexible and agile than other cats but that's about it.
Physical Weaknesses: Is a complete fail at anything that involves running. She can't run, can't fight, and is weaker than most cats (but not the weakest there is).
Mental Strengths: Thinks things out and is a prodigy with medicine. She's usually calm. Usually. Oh, she can lie very well. But usually won't come down to it. Usually.
Mental Weaknesses: Is completely antisocial. Does not talk more than she needs to do. Very paranoid when something against her belief is suggested, and often too paranoid for her own good.
History: Grew up as a single kit... if that's normal. And spent her days fiddling with plants she found. Again, if that's even remotely possible. Spent her days as a loner, away from everyone else - but of course, still part of the clan. Just isolating herself.
Other: Nothing else?




... that was lame.

[Renen]

Let me help you, kirbeh.

Because she is a kit, her name would be MintKIT.

All kits are between the ages of 0-6 moons (months) old.

Apperance would be just like the apperance of a normal cat. What color is her fur? Her eyes?

Can you develop her personality a little more?

She has to have SOME history. Who's her mom? Her dad?

[Mintkit]

Like I said, I know NOTHING about Warriors, and as a huuuuuuuuge favor can you fix it for me? I'd probably screw something else up.

... oh fine, I'll do it myself. THERE.

[Wrenstar]

(sorry I'm on my Wrenstar account and not my admin one)

I'd like you to expand this slightly if you can.

Five months is, you are correct, five moons.

I'd like you to expand on her appearance. Think of cats you know or have seen. Light grey fur and green eyes is fine, but how long is her fur? Is it smooth or ragged? Does it stick up in awkward places or is it sleek? Is she pretty? Is she small, or large? Is she slim and wiry or heavily built? What about lithe? How does she move- flowingly, slowly, quickly, sharply? Does she walk tall or does she slouch? What about her voice?

Now, Strengths and Weaknesses. She must have some physical strengths. Even if she isn't a fast runner or good fighter, is she flexible? Graceful? Agile? She should have at least one- nobody's useless at everything. If she's very good at healing cats, that goes in Mental Strengths. Physical Weaknesses should be a defined list- 'isn't a fast runner', 'weak', 'slow', 'clumsy', all those work.

I'd like you to expand all of this. You don't have to think of her like a cat, if that's hard. Think of her like a human in a cat's body. Logical is a good strength, but how about more? Nobody's got only one good point. Is she kind? Gentle? Smart? Intuitive? Sensitive? Good with people? Sensible? Practical? Creative? Resourceful? Also, just 'Logical' is acceptable, but it's much better if we know in which way she's logical. Is she a slow but steady thinker? Has she got all four paws firmly on the ground? Is she practical? Does she think quickly and solve problems?

You can also work on your mental weaknesses. In what way is she moody? Does she throw temper tantrums, or is she just irritable? Is she like this with everybody, or is she capable of being polite to certain people (eg. family, her mentor)? What does she have little patience with- is she impatient with people, or can she never wait to get stuff done? Why? Is she just rude-impatient, or more the kind of "OMSCcan'twaittobeanapprentice" impatient? What about her naive-ness - what is she naive about? In what way? When? Why?

Please don't use characters from other canons in profiles. Many people won't have read the Underland Chronicles and as such won't understand who or what 'Ripred' is (including me). What kind of loner? We understand she belongs to a Clan, so it might be better if you used the term 'independent' or 'introverted'.

It's fine if you leave it reasonably undeveloped, since she's a kit, so long as you expand it when she grows up. It's also fine if you do a pretty basic history. Just give us a sense of how she grew up- did she have brothers or sisters, what happened to them, did she get into trouble, why, etc. As she's only five moons old, her history doesn't need to be long.

Good luck and have fun!

[Mintkit]

Mm-hmm, yeah, I'm more used to the human profiles.... Lyta, why did you drag me into this again...

I'll fix it in the morning... too sleepy now and I still need to finish my AWH notes....

[Renen]

Have...fun?

[Mintkit]

Modified. And edited her personality. Ish.

[Feather That Drifts On Breeze]

Accepted!

Remember you can always edit her later and improve on her as she grows up (though make sure you clear any major changes with us; we don't want you unbalancing her without us seeing). If she's going to be a medicine prodigy, it's probably good if you apply for her to become DuskClan Medicine Cat Apprentice in the Grand Opening thread. Of course, since Medicine Cat Apprentice is a major position, you may want to read the Warriors series before taking it on, or take tutoring in our board.

[Renen]

I CAN TUTOR YOU PM ME IF YOU WANNA

*locks thread*

kbaibai.

[Accalia]

You need to change the Display Name 'fighterkirby1998' to 'Mintkit'. You can do that by pressing 'Profile' (under the huge Falling Era banner at the top of each page), and editing the Display Name to Mintkit. Once you have done that, we can put you into the group 'DuskClan' and add Mintkit's name to the DuskClan page. You will then be able to RP along with the rest of us! Have fun